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  • Minji Kang
  • 승인 2018.11.24 14:47
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  • Matthew 2018-12-25 21:14:14

    I think this must have been a very interesting case for you! I think that the article as good, but it can be better if you were to bring out your own opinions on the event, such as what can be improved on instead of merely interviewing and interpreting the deep meaning the event had to some members.   삭제

    • Matthew Choi 2018-12-25 21:08:50

      I think this must have been a very interesting case for you! I think that the article as good, but it can be better if you were to bring out your own opinions on the event, such as what can be improved on instead of merely interviewing and interpreting the deep meaning the event had to some members.   삭제

      • Matthew Choi 2018-12-25 20:57:54

        Great Article! I think that is was interesting, albeit it could be better if you were to add your opinions on the race rather than just interviews and what the race was for several members of the CDS community.   삭제

        • Matthew Choi 2018-12-25 20:55:18

          Great Article! I think that is was interesting, albeit it could be better if you were to add your opinions on the race rather than just interviews and what the race was for several members of the CDS community.   삭제

          • Jaehong Min 2018-12-03 20:19:56

            Thank you for sharing about your experience! It was interesting to read about, especially as my school doesn't have such a school wide athletic event. The article would have been more solid if you included some personal or reflective thoughts, but good job nonetheless!   삭제

            • Im Dakyoung 2018-12-01 00:25:46

              Maybe it could have been better if you could include more of what you felt and learned from the experience!   삭제

              • Im Dakyoung 2018-12-01 00:25:02

                I really enjoyed this article too! I could feel the fresh and exciting atmosphere as well as the reluctance to run because some of us feel lazy (haha) I really like it that you wrote it in a way that it comes vividly to the readers.   삭제

                • Jason 2018-11-24 17:48:29

                  ... tradition is worthwhile? Is it fair to "force" everyone to do it? Just some things to think about.   삭제

                  • Jason 2018-11-24 17:47:41

                    Interesting article - would advise that you take a look at your grammar though... For a better flow of the article, I would suggest that you seamlessly incorporate the interview in your article, rather than dedicating a block to it. I also challenge you to add your own opinions: do you think the   삭제

                    • Rachel Lee 2018-11-24 15:13:53

                      I enjoyed reading this article; the organization of the content made this piece interesting to read! After reading the article, I couldn’t help but wonder - was there a specific reason CDS runs every year other than for school spirit, and why was running chosen as the evevent?   삭제

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