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  • Minji Kang
  • 승인 2018.11.24 14:47
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  • Jaehong Min 2018-12-03 20:19:56

    Thank you for sharing about your experience! It was interesting to read about, especially as my school doesn't have such a school wide athletic event. The article would have been more solid if you included some personal or reflective thoughts, but good job nonetheless!   삭제

    • Im Dakyoung 2018-12-01 00:25:46

      Maybe it could have been better if you could include more of what you felt and learned from the experience!   삭제

      • Im Dakyoung 2018-12-01 00:25:02

        I really enjoyed this article too! I could feel the fresh and exciting atmosphere as well as the reluctance to run because some of us feel lazy (haha) I really like it that you wrote it in a way that it comes vividly to the readers.   삭제

        • Jason 2018-11-24 17:48:29

          ... tradition is worthwhile? Is it fair to "force" everyone to do it? Just some things to think about.   삭제

          • Jason 2018-11-24 17:47:41

            Interesting article - would advise that you take a look at your grammar though... For a better flow of the article, I would suggest that you seamlessly incorporate the interview in your article, rather than dedicating a block to it. I also challenge you to add your own opinions: do you think the   삭제

            • Rachel Lee 2018-11-24 15:13:53

              I enjoyed reading this article; the organization of the content made this piece interesting to read! After reading the article, I couldn’t help but wonder - was there a specific reason CDS runs every year other than for school spirit, and why was running chosen as the evevent?   삭제

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